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Subject: El Lozer's Debut 1-9-11 Sun Jan 09, 2011 7:26 am
Karal Brown: "well it's been one heck of a night so far."
Stephen Cooke: "If you say so But if you ask me.." *Suddenly the lights dim and Music starts.*
Stephen Cooke: "Whats going on?"
*A masked man heads down to the ring.*
Karal Brown: "I've never Seen this guy before, Have you?"
*Before Stephen could answer The masked man grabs a mic and starts to talk.*
EL Lozer: "Years they mocked me. Time and time again I failed. They laughed, taunted and belittled my skill."
Stephen Cooke: "What is he talking about?"
EL Lozer: "Now it's my turn Before my time in this fed end You will know fear, You will know pain But most of all you will know EL Lozer!!!!" *EL Lozer Drops the Mic and slowly exits the ring.*
Karal Brown: That was strange.
Stephen Cooke: Strange! That's all you can come up with? I think the IIW Just added another lunatic to it's roster.
*The scene fades away.*
Last edited by EL Lozer on Sun Jan 09, 2011 7:18 pm; edited 3 times in total
EL Lozer
Posts : 7 Join date : 2010-12-22
Subject: Re: El Lozer's Debut 1-9-11 Sun Jan 09, 2011 7:28 am
Hope this is okay.
Mike The Greek Five Star Poster
Posts : 99 Join date : 2010-12-26 Location : Thessaloniki,Greece
Wrestler Info Class: Speed Level: 11-15 Wrestler Score(WS): 40,001-50,000
Subject: Re: El Lozer's Debut 1-9-11 Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:08 am
Common mistake: put ** when describing actions. The other RP is good (You missed the bold at the end of the RP xD)
EL Lozer
Posts : 7 Join date : 2010-12-22
Subject: Re: El Lozer's Debut 1-9-11 Sun Jan 09, 2011 7:18 pm
Did I fix it right?
Mike The Greek Five Star Poster
Posts : 99 Join date : 2010-12-26 Location : Thessaloniki,Greece
Wrestler Info Class: Speed Level: 11-15 Wrestler Score(WS): 40,001-50,000
Subject: Re: El Lozer's Debut 1-9-11 Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:04 pm
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